Review: The Mare Is a Story of Defiance

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Mary Gaitskill may be the last author one would expect to write a story of a girl and her horse. The reigning classic in the equine genre, Enid Bagnold’s National Velvet, tells the sweet story of Velvet, a teenage girl who learns to ride the steeplechase on her beloved piebald. By contrast, Gaitskill’s short stories and novels have, until now, regarded life less as a journey toward triumph than as a series of humiliations to be (barely) endured. The author’s best-known story was adapted into the BDSM film Secretary; her 2005 novel Veronica, a bitter masterpiece, granted its narrator a glimpse of fame and achievement before plunging her into poor health and degradation.

And yet Gaitskill has, with her new novel The Mare, learned a different gait. This novel’s protagonist, also named Velvet, is tough and taciturn, but she opens up on a Fresh Air Fund trip to upstate New York after meeting an ill-tempered horse with whom she has an intimate, almost supernatural connection. Velvet’s life in New York City, where she lives with a stern, illiterate Dominican mother who cannot speak English and rents out Velvet’s bedroom to survive, comes to feel like a shadow version of the life she experiences while riding.

There’s moral complexity to The Mare. Velvet’s host Ginger, a recovering alcoholic coming to terms with the death of her sister, is motivated by a potent mix of altruism, a sublimated desire for a daughter and the wish to live her own life again, but better. (Her husband Paul, less so.) And Velvet’s mother, who’d be easy for a novelist to render as an obstacle to be overcome, is animated by a complicated but no less real love.

We see the story through all these perspectives in alternating first-person narrations that give a real sense of each character’s passions and flaws. The Mare is far from childlike, but it is a novel of late childhood: that state of being in which one is constantly aware of but unable to reach an independent life beyond the present.

By the time the barriers of geography, mind-set and circumstance erode to bring all the characters together, we’ve seen exactly how judgment has held each of them back. It’s only through outright defiance of what’s expected of her that Velvet is able to experience a moment of grace. It’s an overtly sentimental moment on its face, and one that gains new resonance for the reader, who knows that it’s not only Velvet who’s breaking free.

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